Uncertain Future

i am a paranoid person. i always wonder if I will make it in society.So far society doesn't welcome me with open arms. People always tell me how weird I am or how I should grow up.

On the window seal I sit

Watching the cars pass by

Time flows slowly

The wind flows through my hair

The paths to my future intrigue my hungry mind

The path I am taking scares me

But it is a path I want to take

Thoughts roll through my mind

What if I fail?

What if I fall and can't get back up?

What if my creative mind can't lead me to my future?

Can I handle the truth?

Only time will tell

All I can do is watch

Watch as the cars drive off to their future

While I sit and think

Never moving on

Reviews

[Idiotekque]

The honesty behind the words shine through. It's more personal thought than poem, and the lack of elaborate wordplay and phrasing does it good when it comes to the subject of the piece.

Very nice, and it's neat to find another writer on Maui. I'm upcountry.

[Kim]

Such an intriguig, ponderful write here. I really loved the last 7 lines in this write. Makes one think. Amazing write.