No One

Opinions. That is all I can say about this poem.

The night sky is a mystery 

Like me the sky constantly changes

The sky weeps, sings and shines

Depending on its mood
But I give props to the sky

For when it is told what the mood will be

It can change in an instant

No one can tell me or the sky

How we live our life

Author's Note

Thank you for catching the errors =D And the reviews

Reviews

[Kim]

so much truth in this write, and it's so nicely expressed. I really enjoyed this

[tekphobik]

I like the youthful feel using 'props' gives this piece. Great comparison between the sky and self, the ever moving attitudes of both being a well-matched pair.

[Ami N.]

Amazing :) I love it! "No one can tell me or the sky / How we live our live"
Love those lines, however, I think the second live should be life (I think ~ I might be wrong) Besides that, wonderfully composed :)