Through My Eyes

This poem is a twin poem. I made one in the perspective of my self and one through hers.

I stand in a dark abyss

Yet I am not alone

A girl stands in front of me

A familiar face

Of a girl I see every night

Her eyes are full of pain, sadness, and hate

But why does she smile?

Why does she have this smile that tells me shes ok?

Does she really like this dark abyss?

The dark abyss that has been her home for so long

The abyss is made up nothing

Absolutely nothing

Just plain darkness

Yet she doesnt belong here

The abyss shields her from evil

But cannot shield her from the loneliness

She so close to me I can touch her

Yet, so far out of reach

Can I save her from this hell?

Or will she decide to stay in this abyss in an eternal rest?

But at last the question must be asked to end this never ending dream

I finally break the silence

After the ear shattering silence dream after dream

Is this never ending dream going to end?

Once the question is asked will I be able to accept the answer?

Author's Note

This was one of the first poems I wrote. I was never good at poems so please be gentle. But all advice/criticisms are welcome.

Reviews

[Maddie:]]

it was actually a very well written piece:] your words are intriguing and make me wonder. especially the question at about the end of every paragraph! nice job:]

[Manpreet]

Lovely poem! I Liked it!