A Call for Help

the fall of the mask

Perfection is failing
The mask falling
And I am flailing
Desperate-Ly
Trying not to be
Here
Or there
But remain somewhere
Lost
Between the reality I witness
And the reality I dream
Of.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[yusavage]

This poem is really touching. I'm amazed by how you used a minimum amount of words to fully describe the feelings of a victim. Your skills are simply amazing!!!