Cruel Trance

      Devious sweetness of the underlying pain,

A Love of the unforgiving sin brought by yesterday,

A cause of a ruined vow another promise to gain,

To my doorstep a rose as an oath you lay.

 

If a golden time I could steal without any condition,

I will make mistakes to right our oblivious situation,

To make the numbest of all hearts to feel emotion,

And make no one else put in an unbearable confusion.

 

Regretful days of how you played our thorny game,

You are like an artist sells thy soul to earn thy fame,

In me you sipped trust and gave me insufferable shame,

Still I am here for your bewildered mind to tame.

 

A broken past and haunted mind of ignorance,

Shattered consciousness needs an acceptance,

Because of conceited love under a cruel trance,

I will bring you back in just one faithful glance.

What deceitful thing that blinded you?

I need a soul to blame and sue,

I beg, I bled still I hear of mouth so rude,

Still I feel no hope of justice to pursue.

 

In a wishful concealed space nowhere to be found,

Wish you hear my agonizing heartbeats, so loud.

I won’t hope to find you once more in a crowd,

Our crowd, the crowd, only a living doubt.

 

Reviews

[Jo March]

very moving, an amazing poem. So vibrant

[Pax]

What deceitful thing that blinded you?
~ seems a very dangerous human nature...*greed*
a deep scar had taste bitterness...

Nice one kabayan!!!

[Ylueria]

Thank you po very much :) happy to have Filipinos here :))

[Pax]

Walang problema...Konti lng ang active, but nandiyan lng sla sa tabi tabi..

[Faffy]

wow....just...wow

[Ylueria]

Thanks very much :)