Crime

Graves pile day by day
Becoming pits for dead souls
Gory crimes never end...

Author's Note

Um, constructive criticism appreciated. :D

Reviews

[Syed Ali]

are we talking abt the NAzi's or the Jews?

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. indeed ... gory crimes are getting a new lease of life every day ... in our contemporary world ... how sad and distressing ... perfectly expressed ...

[Ray]

So true.... you show how the world can never truly be peaceful, and is it just me or is this haiku telling me that innocent people die everyday due to the guilty

You've showed what crime really is, an ongoing and continuous act. If you wanted to make this longer you could add anothr few lines to make this a deep piece. However I really like it done factually here. Good work :>