Girl in My Mirror

the girl in my mirror stares at me...

I see a girl in my mirror
Her eyes are so sad
She’s weeping tears of sorrow
I try to tell her it’s not that bad

I see a girl in my mirror
Her heart has been broken
She’s bleeding from within
I try to fix her heart with words softly spoken

I see a girl in my mirror
Her dreams have been shattered
She’s falling into darkness
I try to help her dreams to be gathered

I see a girl in my mirror
Her love has been stolen
She’s thinking of him in pain
I try to tell her he will be forgotten

I see a girl in my mirror
Her smile was swept away
She’s crying at all times
I try to tell her she will be okay

I see a girl in my mirror
Her body is full of strain
She’s fighting for the better
I try to aid her fight her pains

Reviews

[Cynthia]

That's a great poem!!!
The poem is full of concept of life to me
( Maybe that's how I feel)

[Jason]

Call it Boy in my mirror and i can relate to it. Awesome work :)

[luciddreamer]

Realizing that you can heal thyself is a beautiful thing....even through pain....really good write :)

"Her love has been stolen
She’s thinking of him in pain
I try to tell her he will be forgotten"

Ur love forgotten in pain.
Ur pain forgotten in love.

It shows both.

great piece :)

[Coyote Poetry]

To realize the pain is the first step in fighting the battle to overcome. The poem words told a sad story. Tears mean we are still are alive. I like the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you. You are a very good writer.

Coyote

[deeps]

I see a girl in my mirror
Her body is full of strain
She’s fighting for the better
I try to aid her fight her pains

I can feel the pain and strife in this stanza here.
This is a very well written write.

[Geralyn Miller]

Amazing; very sad, yet hopeful.
I read 25 or so poems about "lost love" each day; most of them make me want to move to another as fast as I can. Your poem made me want to read it again! And I am glad I did...