Free As a Bird

Freedom

In a moment of lonesome
I stole a glimpse from the sky
Closed my eyes to feel the air in my lungs
Listening to my heartbeat
Looked up at the birds of the air
They fly exceedingly
Sing joyfully
I look closely into my heart
And there came a wish
A solemn wish
To live freely as a bird
Then in that moment
My loneliness disappeared.

Author's Note

Pls do review

Reviews

[guy drori]

Has a hopeful ending . . . liberating almost

[Roland Petrov]

Well composed; it's like a short story, with beginning, middle, and ending. You've captured a transformational moment with charm and grace.

[prince digbani]

a nice poem for the morning