snowfall in your eyes

frost covers the heart when your long fingers slowly let go of my hand. your confidence that you''ll return before the snow has melted is almost offensive. how would I recognize you without your winter coat. and how will you find me when my tracks melt. if you take one more step into the blizzard you'll disappear. your blue eyes, full of snowflakes, the one thing I'll never forget. 

Reviews

[Nona]

oh! how beautiful! I almost see the 'blue eyes' full of snowflakes looking at me! magic piece!

[Yheela]

Thank you!

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

To be honest, I have trouble and great issues recognizing people in winter! How strange that we hide in winter and get ready to melt for a few months.

Likely Canadians winters are fiercer than Sweden though, no?

[Yheela]

Yeah, I guess your winters are fiercer. We have the Golf stream that gives us a much milder climate then we should have.
At the moment we have rain and all the snow's melted... :/

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Well winter is not what it used to be, wild fluctuations, snow at odd times...the life is a changing and that's not even many degrees, our grandkids are going to know a different planet!

[Yheela]

I really miss the winters of my childhood... and the springs, summers and autumns. It's just not the same.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Yes that's true...

[Khloevhr]

Well, this Phoenix Winter is harsh, hidden under fashionable clothing, false hair...Even I don"t recognize myself. Do I change my look due to no known warmth from others except for me plus one...The answer is YES! I love your imagery....Uhmmm at first I wasnt sure which path to go with my review but uhmmmm yeah :) Great choice of wording, unfolding, and holding the readers' attention :)

[Yheela]

Thank you very much. ^_^

[Khloevhr]

:D