luna

here, the place where we first met.

footprints, for ever a part of the dust.

no winds over this empty vastness.

mountains' shadow, creeping.

rays of the pale sun disappear.

leaves me in the dark.

cold light of the Milky Way stars.

there, the place where we finally said goodbye.

now, I sail alone across Mare Tranquillitatis.

Reviews

[Andrew N. Farrens]

This poem sound sounds to me suspiciously like karmic intrigue mysticism in a first person reflection zone one dark night as loneliness creeps through your soul...

[Poison Ivy]

this is so mystical and inspiring. beautiful poem my luv

[Yheela]

Thank you Ivy.
^_^

[Cole Hayley]

mountains' shadow, creeping.

rays of the pale sun disappear



Beautiful spellbinding peice.

[Yheela]

Thank you so much.

[Lisa Ring]

Eerie and beautiful, I love the image you described. I could almost feel the suffocation of the atmosphere and the darkness.

[Yheela]

Thank you! ^_^

[Toni Blackerby]

i like this a lot

[Yheela]

Thank you! ^_^

[Toni Blackerby]

Your welcome

[axel]

hmmm... mare tranquilantis,the tranqui sea, i like that

[Yheela]

Thanks.

[Heather]

this is so beautiful, I love the moon and you captured it so beautifully in this piece.

[Yheela]

I love the moon too.
Thank you.

[afra]

awesome write ...so beautiful ....i love it

[Yheela]

^_^ Thank you!

[Enid Blake]

I liked the blend of the eerie sci-fi atmosphere with the air of poignancy :)

[Yheela]

Thank you!

[Dr. Wood ?]

very surreal this one...Be a romantic place though...with Earth rise and all that...Shows great imagination too...It could almost be an opening chapter of something more...Sailing on a sea of the moon....

[Yheela]

Thank you, I do have an idea of adventure in the solar system ... Ths would fit in there as well.

[Dr. Wood ?]

surely would..weird really because I have been playing around with an alien theme again these last few days...One with a twist

[Yheela]

^_^