Krogan Lament

I lost my heart on Tuchanka
I lost it on the wasteland there
I lost my heart on Tuchanka
Lucky for me I've got a spare

They sent us to fight the Rachni
They sent us everywhere
They sent us to fight the Rachni
When we died they did not care

Now they fear the beast they made
Now they fear us all
Now they fear the beast they made
And plot our downfall

Asari, Salarian and Turian put lab coats on
Asari, Salarian and Turian think us too wild
Asari, Salarian and Turian put lab coats on
Resulting in so few Krogan child

I left my heart on Tuchanka
I left my heart in the radioactive dust
I left my heart on Tuchanka
I only return when I have lost my battle-lust

 

 

Reviews

[David the writer]

Whoa! this was amazing! just wow science fiction/ horror. It was really nice, and it flowed well

[Yheela]

Thank you so much!
I struggled some with it, but now I'm real proud. ^_^

[David the writer]

You really should be. It's very interesting, original, and very skifully done. Espeacally with the repetion gives it a more beautiful flow

[Yheela]

^_^

[Sheila Kline]

Very interesting take on obviously one of your favorite games.......I like it....rings of battle and victory cries!
I am not a gamer, but can feel the passion you have for it.....Keep playing - it certainly makes for an interesting read!!

[Yheela]

Thank you, it's not the first poem to come out of this game. ^_^

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are a Gamer Yheela. To write so passionately about a computer game and make it sound romantic. You are a warrior queen and poet!!!!

[Yheela]

Well, if you are a geek/gamer/nerd, be passionate about it! ^_^