fleeting moments

 

there's a twinkle in your eye, I like to believe it's because of me, for when we speak, of inconsequential things, I feel in my heart, three unspoken words

***

I know you're watching me, I can see you there, from the corner of my eye,  nothing can appease the fluttering butterflies, they seem intent on making me blush

***

waves crushing pebbles, scattering seashells across the sand, my heart sings with the wind, for you my love, you are my ocean

Reviews

[Eloha]

This is very you, I can sense the way you are with your loved ones in this.

[Yheela]

Thank you Eloha.

[Heather]

Had to save this in my library... loved loved loved it!!

[Yheela]

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Such an enchanting poem. Is it literal or metaphor? That is for you to know or the reader to decide. Personally I see both the description of possibly unrequited love or simply a love of nature and the sea.

[Yheela]

I can't remember what I wrote this about, but both of your interpretations are alright with me. ^_^

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think it was unpure thoughts!