New Start

New Start

A Poem by Yheela
"

First Day of School

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Butterflies that never sleep

Fancy shoes carry me to the front door

Spit and polish

Put my best smile on

New week, new day, new school, new everything

A Nebula for your thoughts

I have a Universe of love in my heart

© 2012 Yheela


Author's Note

Yheela
Today all the year one students start.
Exciting!

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Very sweet reflecting the immense possibilities.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

Thank you.
The first day in school always a evergreen memory in life. Good job. Your feelings are effectively written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
exciting indeed, An adventure which folk such as you will enhance, I am sure. I still remember my first day at school...I cried.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

I've always liked school, even now when working there. ^_^
Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

yeah..I loved school...rubbish as I was.......I also adored my short stint working in one.....Ahhh.... read more
Hi Yheela where have you been?
If you had not given away the theme I would have interpreted this differently. It read like someone searching but failing but hopeful. A lovely piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

Hi, I'm busy and stressed out about school. Don't have much time for other things.
I like you.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

12 Years Ago

Missing you. Don't stress too much. Another day another week another term will come with or without .. read more
aww i love this! Wish all my teachers were this enthusiastic! i think this is great :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm sure you have some - maybe not as silly as me though. ^_^
SmileBig :)

12 Years Ago

lol maybee.
aww how sweetly you describe the feelings of the first day of school. Such special day for children, you described it beautifully.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I think I was as nervous as they were. ^_^
That is exciting! I'd love to be in your class...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

I'm sure I'd love having you as a student. ^_^
Eloha

12 Years Ago

Hmm, I'm actually quite a difficult child *blushes*
Yheela

12 Years Ago

My favorite kind. Class becomes more interesting when you have a challenge, and I tend to do well wi.. read more
How wonderful you have started the first day of school in such wonderful fashion and with LOVE in your heart!! How can one go wrong?? No, never!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yheela

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on August 20, 2012
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Yheela
Yheela

Gotene, Sweden



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