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Forever Night

Forever Night

A Poem by H L Rose

To hear and sing the with’ring soul 

A song of lonesome longing 

Lost in wond’ring the empty forest 

Of loathsome melancholy 

 

To rise and fall in hopeless faith 

Befelled by endless echoing

Of stars who once shone brightest 

Their ancient lights beckoning 

 

But oh the trees their dark’ning leaves 

Left by springs green thriving 

Shade from view the friendly moon

And all that’s with it shining 

 

A weeping tale whose tears do trail

Meanders through Forever Night

Romantic stories torment the mind--"

doomed, it never takes flight 

 

It’s silver wings could sail the wind 

If only it would humbly ask 

When sun fades and day dims 

In pride, it’s anchored to Forever Night

 

Upon the breeze of nightly melodies 

It whispers to the air 

A lonely moan of pitiful longings 

The ear can scarcely bear 

 

Upon the leaves of ghastly trees 

The moon does gleam through shadow 

And dying lights from heavenly bodies 

Fake life in an elderly sky

 

© 2023 H L Rose


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I'm sensing some Wordsworth, Frost, and Dickinson in this piece - a wondrous blend mixed with your own voice, and you pull off the occasional nonrhyming stanzas fantastically!. You have musicality issues in some places and in others you have spelling errors (or the error is that you used the wrong homonym - eg: "bear" is the word you want, not "bare"). But everything else is absolutely stellar!! Glad to see you're still writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


H L Rose

5 Years Ago

I never considered the difference between rhythm and musicality so thanks for bringing it up. The 20.. read more
emipoemi

5 Years Ago

1984 has its merits, and the movie adaptation with John Hurt is great. But Orwell's poetry is amazin.. read more
H L Rose

5 Years Ago

I'll be checking it out then!

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