Upside Down Stream

Dramatizing my car problems.

There’s an upside down stream 
Along the inside 
Of my car door seam, 
That drips into a waterfall. 
I feel a splash. 
There’s a leak. 

Author's Note

Praise and disapproval welcome. Criticism requested.

Reviews

[Beccy]

Sticky tape and sealing wax solves everything; at least, that's what politicians would have us believe while they snuffle their snouts in the trough.

On the surface this is simply a fun little scribble about a leak in your car; and perhaps that is precisely what it is; but I love to interpret poems in different ways and I took a deeper meaning from it, hence my comment above. :))

Either way, it matter not, for this was pithy and nicely written.

Beccy.

[H L Rose]

Thank you so much! I’m so glad you like it and really appreciate your thoughts. I love to look deeper into poetry, past the surperficual(often funny) surface of both the things I read and write.

[Abby]

This is just the right amount of witty and poetic. Love it.

[H L Rose]

Thank you! I’m never called witty😆.

[emipoemi]

Whatever happened to getting your car fixed? :p (Lord knows when it's gonna breakdown on ya)

This is funny, for what it's worth. Short, snappy, and funny. Well done!

[H L Rose]

Tomorrow!!! Or at least the dangerous stuff. I'm too broke to fix the leakage.
Glad you think so!

[Davidgeo]

It made me chuckle. I liked it.

[H L Rose]

I'm glad !