Is it safe?

Another poem about God.

Is it safe to present my case,
Or will you rage with hate,
Will you save my tortured soul,
Or is the Abyss of Hell my fate,
I'd do anything for the terrors of Hell to abate,
May I have another chance, or is it too late?

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[M P Ramesh]

sitara,

life is occurring once. Even hindus who justify life after death and life beyond death and reincarnation stress the point that one should complete the mission offered by this life. Why?
No doubt only writers who creates and recreates in a single life. Means they can be termed as Gods in view

excellent attempt...........


carry on..........


mp ramesh

[YeshuaRedeemed]

I think life begins at conception, but I see your point. :)

[M P Ramesh]

Sitara,

It is the popular science you speak about and contemporary in nature. There is type of haven once to rely on such general (PRESENT )TREND. BUT ACTUALLY THE WORKS LIKE LITERATURE HAVE NO REALM TO SPEAK THERE ON. aS THEY ARE BEYOND SUCH INTELLECT. You may also see you or anybody for that matter do no know WHY and HOW they write. It happens. Like that there are many such , you may call miracles....mysteries......wonders....enigmas..... in nature. Science could not classify it and decipher it. No issue. Science was always behind in the run. But once it reaches there and stands alon with that , there begins another above and before it. One can also say we were reading and re reading always . Forgetting and memorising and discovering always. You may read Amir D Aczel's latest work named " Why Science disaprove the existence of God" also.
There is life an it definitions beyond science offers. For example you may rea the extraordinary life survives in Himalaya where for centuries a very different social /community survives with unimaginable talents, skills( you may call SIDDHIES) WHICH SCIENCE KNOWS 5% only.
Conception is , as far as I concerned , a process starts somewhere past and you may refer when a boy or girl decides it in their mind or when they touch with magnetic bond first or something which I can not put to words due to my inability.
Thanks for the sharing

mp