Exhale

brown body trembling

color drained and gone

refusing the inevitable

fighting to hold on

skin stretched and weathered

veins exposed to all

shiver in the wind

watch the others fall

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Wha? I didn't review this when you posted it...over a month ago??? Where was I, la la land??? holy crap!

"This paints a very vivid image for me...makes me think this was something you saw on one of your recent trips...but then...It makes me think of a leaf in the fall, drained of it's color and brittle... Great potential personification and wonderful images."