a bed at sea

A Story by onjow

There is a bed at aflout

flouting here and there

for when the boy wakes

the bed will be safe in the room.

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Waterbed? Short. Sweet.

aaaa	I am not sure if you are doing this on purpose but it is afloat not aflout. :) Posted 14 Years Ago I am not sure if you are doing this on purpose but it is afloat not aflout. :) Rating /100 0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I forgot the capitls

I really like this. It is short and powerful. Keep it up!

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Added on April 3, 2010
Last Updated on April 4, 2010

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