just not there

about me n my guy friend

I was there for you

and you were there  

but not completely you would

normally be in your head thinking

of other things you can do

 

Away from me

and i would be upset

but you don't care

and what you dont realize

i've had a crush on you

for months

and you only ever talked to me

because i have a brother

and he's your best friend

 

But while you and him

would hang out

or play some kind of sport

together i would always

be right there

 

But you didn't care

you never cared

you only thought of me as

your best friends sister

 

 

And i've always been hurt

by that and how so many

people including you

say are you micah's sister

 

Explain to me how

you were mean to me

and rude  but now your like

a sweet, caring big brother

and i love you

 

I love you big brother ;)

Reviews

[just is]

Aw so sweet I enjoyed the emotions through out.
I can feel this one tug. Amazing read.

[Summer'sBreeze]

what a beautiful poem, short and sweet.
Great job!

[The XYZ Writer]

Very nice. We all have a desire to be noticed, but for some of us its harder to say that. People label you as someone and that's what you're stuck with like "Micah's sister," and you're not seen for the person you really are. Just like Coyote down there, I love the ending of the poem. No matter what happens, sometimes we can't stop loving that person. :) Good job Nohara. (Jessica?)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ending to this poem. We need people to be our friend who can make us laugh and appreciate life. I like the desire and the feel of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote