Will he notice me?

its about a love that will never die in me!

I've known you seven months

and you've never noticed me

but I was always there for you

 

Whenever you would fall

I would help you back up

 

Did you care

I always hoped you would

but no you always

cared about someone else

 

But ever since I met you

I've always cared and 

thought about you  

 

I've waited for you to notice me

for so long that I waited

but you never noticed me

 

You live just down the road but

in my heart it feels like you

could be a million miles away

 

Did I ever give up on you

no not even once and

will I ever give up

no because you are

special to me

and I will never give up

 

Even if you never care

I will still be there

for you my true love

un-noticed

 

And I think I will never be

noticed by you the one I love

the one I'll always be there for

the one that didnt care

but no matter what you say or do 

I will always be there for you  

because your special to me and 

 

 I will love you 4-ever and always

Author's Note

this is sorta a true story so read it and review it please

Reviews

[Mitch]

I had something similar when I was in school. Reading this reminds me what that felt like. Ever on periphery, just enough to be around but never noticed.

I hope that since this (looking as to when this was posted, its been a while) things are good. I know this is partly from life, so I hope that if there was a restriction to your voice, you now speak in full force and are noticed.

Nice write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is a hard desire to understand. Need two people on the same path with the same desire. Take luck and timing for love to grow. I like the story and the positive ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[~Dragon X]

A sweet poem! :) Nice, strong words used to convey determination and your willingness to never give up :D