Silence

The distance we had was like we in different worlds who never orbited next to each other.

All they had in common was the sun that gave them life and the sound of raindrops that scattered around their backyard.

They were of different breeds, yet they were from the same animal.
They had the same needs but different wants as they shared the same water but lived under different roofs

Argosy
They would write, letting the ink flow on their dry pages,
The same feeling they got as they carried on writing their lives away

As they wrote they saw each other in the lines remembering the memories they've shared.
As they write they meet and collide with each other till death dues them apart

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' As they wrote they saw each other in the lines remembering the memories they've shared.. .. '

Such beautiful sadness in your words, Yasmin... it's how i call writing that separates two or more people from the other.. and where love lived or lives. Your language is so finely and gently laid.

Hopefully you'll soon find some trustworthy guidance in and inspiration from cafe writers. Whilst there are a few nuisances, 99.9% of the members are wonderful!

[poison&kerosene]

I really enjoyed this. The distance between two people who love each other was illustrated perfectly in your metaphors. Well done!