Prologue

I had finally found him. I was trying my best to control my breathing as it echoed against the walls of the the isolated room we were in. It was hard to keep up with his pace. He seemed to have heard my ragged intakes of oxygen after all that running and it was just my luck that my local service provider texted me and sent my phone off chiming in my pocket. He stopped in his tracks as I quickly scanned the dim room for a place to hide. I slipped into a small space behind a post which folded a few inches off the wall. His footsteps bounced off the dull white walls as he got closer.

We made eye contact. He shook his head and laughed nonchalantly while I searched to find my voice. I was a bit panic-stricken. Why was I even doing this?

'You look so pleased to see me,' he commented on my fear. 'You know, I saw you reflect on so many car windows on my way here and I knew for sure it was you because that Love Spell scent of yours...' He inhaled sharply. 'Glorious, I miss it. I miss you. I'm sorry and I really miss you.'

He was right before me. His dark eyes searched mine questioningly and he asked the dreaded question, 'Do you forgive me?'

I just stared at him blankly, but alot was going on in my head. What was I to do? Should I? He was the one who ---

I cut those thoughts off as he slowly inched his face closer and closer until our noses touched. I couldn't even think straight anymore. I didn't know if he was about to do what I thought he was about to. He brought his palms to my cheeks, caressing. I felt the tension slowly sliding away and I was quite aware that his hand slipping onto my shoulder. 

I barely whispered 'yes' when his hands tighted around my neck. With that, everything went dark and silent.

Reviews

[McBear]

Woah! I really liked this. Maybe a little hard to understand at first but it gets really interesting. Good job friend! Just one thing. I noticed that to use diolougue you used single quotes ---> ' not like its bad or anything, haha. but honestly, very good job! I loved it

[siddhi]

it is relly a mysterious one that what will happen next

i really want to read more now

thankyou for sending me that request

[ExquisiteEyes]

Quite an interesting start to the story. It captures the reader's attention

[Bear]

Critique: (it echoed against the walls of the the isolated room we were in) the the?
(but alot was going on in my head) a lot
(when his hands tighted around my neck) tightened

Review: It does everything you need a prologue to do, it captures the reader's imagination from the start, it offers many possibilities for plot lines. It has mystery, action, suspense with a touch of intrigue so well done, Clap! Clap!

[Vishalla]

This might be an okay book...i guess.

[Yashoda]

K Vishalla. K.

[Vishalla]

Wait you're in school? dID U GIVE UP MY STUFF?

[Yashoda]

I didn't go to school today. Sir emailed us at 4:35 am saying he ain't coming today.....but i made up my mind last night that I wasn't going anyway

[Vishalla]

bRO BUT I SENT IT IN *panics*

[Yashoda]

LOL Dw, one time Allyah send her lab book for me to drop in and it wasn't there when I went. They said as soon as they get lab books, they drop it in

[TheBubbleManiac]

Wow, this kept me wanting to read more. This is such a mysterious book, and I will want to read more! Looking forward to the next chapter!

[Jacob Clifford]

Hmm. A lot of mystery. Some somewhat subtle hinting. Violence. This has everything a good story needs. I'll definitely make it a point to read the rest of this before long.