LOVE IT!!!!! This is a superb poem; the story told, the word pictures, and all painted with perfect rhyme, rhythm and tempo, makes it a delight to read!!! Your imagery- "His pupil, dark as the moonlit ocean
Circumscribed by an iris golden " is awesome; and the word play on "fowl breathed" is great. Admittedly, as I have two big dogs and nine cats, I do believe in some mystical power imbued within the feline species, and when I have labored with serious health issues, some of the cats come and lay upon me to "help me" get through. Anyway, great work! Keep it up.
Posted 9 Months Ago
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9 Months Ago
Thanks, Julian. 9 cats and 2 dogs huh! That's incredible, and I must say I envy you. The poem I wrot.. read moreThanks, Julian. 9 cats and 2 dogs huh! That's incredible, and I must say I envy you. The poem I wrote stemmed from a deep sorrow about the loss of my cat many years ago, and somehow grew into something optimistic and humorous almost. Anyways, I must agree that one of the few things getting me through this life is my cat, and I'm glad you liked my poem!
9 Months Ago
May you and your cat live in health and happiness, and may your cat from the past look down from the.. read moreMay you and your cat live in health and happiness, and may your cat from the past look down from the heavens and bless you with prayers and pure love.
This is such a cute poem about your cat. The words have an elegant flow to them, with the poetry being vivid in itself. You've really done a wonderful job with this. Also, Anubis is an adorable name for a cat. Well done, and keep on writing :)
LOVE IT!!!!! This is a superb poem; the story told, the word pictures, and all painted with perfect rhyme, rhythm and tempo, makes it a delight to read!!! Your imagery- "His pupil, dark as the moonlit ocean
Circumscribed by an iris golden " is awesome; and the word play on "fowl breathed" is great. Admittedly, as I have two big dogs and nine cats, I do believe in some mystical power imbued within the feline species, and when I have labored with serious health issues, some of the cats come and lay upon me to "help me" get through. Anyway, great work! Keep it up.
Posted 9 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Months Ago
Thanks, Julian. 9 cats and 2 dogs huh! That's incredible, and I must say I envy you. The poem I wrot.. read moreThanks, Julian. 9 cats and 2 dogs huh! That's incredible, and I must say I envy you. The poem I wrote stemmed from a deep sorrow about the loss of my cat many years ago, and somehow grew into something optimistic and humorous almost. Anyways, I must agree that one of the few things getting me through this life is my cat, and I'm glad you liked my poem!
9 Months Ago
May you and your cat live in health and happiness, and may your cat from the past look down from the.. read moreMay you and your cat live in health and happiness, and may your cat from the past look down from the heavens and bless you with prayers and pure love.