Here By Your Side

I would like your opinion on a story i was asked to write. I would like to know if you think I should continue to write it and how you feel about it so far. It's not much, but I'd still appreciate it.

This will be the first year I spend Christmas without Jason. He would hold me in his arms while he hummed the melodies of my favorite Christmas songs. This year, I lay alone by the fire, with the TV on, . The Christmas before Jason accident, he took a tape recorder and videotaped me in his arms as he softly hummed the melody to Silent Night to me. His voice and warm arms always made me fall asleep. So, I lie here in a silent room that is warm from the fire, only to hear the familiar voice hummed the soft tune of Silent Night. I miss my Jason. I miss Jason so much. With dry tears I lay and listen to the videotape of what was such a memory. “Silent night, mmmhmm…”