This is Poetry

This is poetry in motion
But you tell me that you hate this new poetry notion
 you can't stand the sound of my pen stroking
Say you rather be
The
One
Stroking
Showing me
The
Motion
Of
Your
Ocean
Thrusting your manhood into my vessel down below
Making me say o
I
Don't
Wanna write
No mo
And you say that you hate when I write
From morning to night
Till darkness turns
To
Light
And then u scream and we fight
But
That
Only
Makes
Me
Write
Don't you see
I write cuz we fight
And I want others to see
What its lik
To
Be
Me
I write and I write
And you sit and you stare
With
That
Glare
In your eyes
And I write on and I ignore
Cause
It
Buys
Me some time
 DON'T YOU SEE
The thing that you want
Seem lik such
A
Bore
They seem to me to be quite a chore
Baby I don't wanna fight
But u gotta hear me
I jus wanna
Write

Reviews

[Erin Phoenix]

I agree your writting and formatting is very unique.

Welcome to Writers Cafe!

Hope to read your work. '

Keep me posted.

Don't be shy to ask for help!

:)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Wonderfully written, nicely done. truely enjoyed this. I like how you formatted it. Unique.


Great Write.