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A Poem by Yari Garcia
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Just a little poem for you :-)

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© 2018 Yari Garcia


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Yari Garcia
Let me know your thoughts ^.^

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This is a playful poem with a childlike tone. I like the way you use many bright & dynamic words -- giggle, flutter, whisper, sparkle – these words bring a poem alive with imagination & also these words sound fun when reading them. This is what “SHOW” instead of tell is about . . . the words you choose SHOW the excitement you want to convey. Instead of saying: “I am excited” . . . you say: “I giggle, flutter, sparkle” and we can SEE how this makes the narrator feel. Excellent job packing your poem with lively fun (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yari Garcia

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :-) Enjoy your weekend!
Yari



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This is so cute! It’s light and giddy and simply fun to read like a little song someone hums while going about their day.

Glad to have read it!


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A touching and knowingly teasing wordset...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yari Garcia

6 Years Ago

I'm happy to hear this! Thank you so much for reading and commenting :-)

Yari
creative and refreshing, really enjoyed. Good work.
-GS

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yari Garcia

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much :-)
This is a playful poem with a childlike tone. I like the way you use many bright & dynamic words -- giggle, flutter, whisper, sparkle – these words bring a poem alive with imagination & also these words sound fun when reading them. This is what “SHOW” instead of tell is about . . . the words you choose SHOW the excitement you want to convey. Instead of saying: “I am excited” . . . you say: “I giggle, flutter, sparkle” and we can SEE how this makes the narrator feel. Excellent job packing your poem with lively fun (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yari Garcia

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :-) Enjoy your weekend!
Yari
Eloquence and creativity
they radiate from the uniqueness of your words.
Amazing read, Yari!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yari Garcia

6 Years Ago

Thank you :-) Have a great weekend!
Yari
I love it. It is very meaningful and encouraging. I was having quite a sad day, but that helped to cheer me up. Keep up the good work, I hope the best for you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yari Garcia

6 Years Ago

I'm very happy to hear this ^.^ Thanks for the review.

Yari

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Added on May 28, 2018
Last Updated on May 28, 2018
Tags: poetry, verses, love poem, motivation, confidence

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Yari Garcia
Yari Garcia

Denver, CO



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~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* =^ v ^= Hi! I'm Yari Garcia. I'm a YA/New Adult author. I would love to share with you short stories and poetry. (/ (/ (^-^) c(")(") .. more..

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