Light as a Feather

(Stiff as a Board)

 

We’re not too spooked to keep playing with the unknown.

We read in a book that we could make each other float.

By one candle light we sit and chant…

Before we couldn’t lift her, but now we can.

Author's Note

Thanks DreyaArt :-) It's about back when my friends and I used to play "light as a feather, stiff as a board".

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

love it.............

[C.A.Jordon]

interesting, enjoy the tone, good metaphor , liked the simile 'we sit and chant', it's alittle short but still a well written poem.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Interesting indeed, and a brilliant piece of gifted writing!

[Thea]

Short but great! :)))
Brilliant...

[DreyaArt]

huh thats very interesting, i like it you should write a story about this