Light as a Feather

(Stiff as a Board)

 

We’re not too spooked to keep playing with the unknown.

We read in a book that we could make each other float.

By one candle light we sit and chant…

Before we couldn’t lift her, but now we can.

Author's Note

Thanks DreyaArt :-) It's about back when my friends and I used to play "light as a feather, stiff as a board".

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Wow, simply amazing. ' by one candle light we sit and chant, before we couldn't lift her but now we can'
truly a great poem:-)

[Rene Velez]

interesting write, i don't think i ever played that game, but nice work.

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, lovely poem said in a few words...I truly enjoyed it, even though, stuff like ouija board or spirit of the glass scares me. :)

[Marie Harrison]

Oh this is so true...amazing what the power of positive group thought can do..can lift mountains or do the impossible. Very inspirational!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Luv the way you used faith to make the impossible possible.
I can only imagine what else is possible when all spirits live together in peace.

[Muse]

Wowzer! You said so much in so few words. The levitation could be felt my talented friend. It wasn't so much beautiful as it was THOUGHT PROVOKING. And not many can get my mind racing. You gave me some ideas to work with here. I just love it when my friends inspire me. xo

[c k doley]

Pure delight. I instantly re-read it several times.

This short poem is just brilliant. Perfect words. How true love or friendship actually can make this happen... :) perfect ballanced on level~

[tk]

hmm. it's a very interesting and wonderful poem, considering the fact that it's short.. i loved this so much.. :) well written!!

[J Todd Underhill]

That is eactly what I thought about when I saw the title. Well done.