My friends value.

I didn't value my thoughts so I bought hers! I didn't value my looks so i bought that too. Had a heart wasn't big enough so silicon did the job. At once I was pure but now I'm as dead as a log. As I grew I died. As I tried more and more each time I cried. At first it was all in vein. Now it's all out of pain. No longer was is it up to me. More like it was up to him/her they. Who are they it's my body screaming HEY! When I look back at it I was killing my self from Outside, In Little did ik it only took one more grin. Until I was out COLD! from the thoughts and looks I wanted to have. It was no longer about me but it was about my friend! The one I loved so very much I realized I wanted be at the end.

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

wow, that's an interesting conjunction of things, I never saw a period and then an exclamation point like that, pivotal line seems like "who are they it's my body screaming HEY.!" That's quite insightful into the window of the piece, I feel like it would take a lot to unravel this so deep, what a body, no body like that but the body screams like it a person's body does, can, etc. there is something very raw about the carnage