SINKING MACHINE

A storm of ideas rips heads off

News about all we do not see

With huge stop signs taking over

In speakers' corner

It grows from drops of life

Brain side effects for future

There blocks run through backs

That bleed in black

The color of sky may be true

And ruled by laws

of not-even-the-same-twice

we'll be looking like mice

An amazing chaos in theory

 

 

[Illustrated by BSK]

Reviews

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Very sool write! Your use of words and phrasing are refreshing in their originality. Made me think. and that is the greatest that a poet can give the reader.

Il a presque arrach� ma t�te!!

Sant�!
FF

[Michael X]

An amazing chaos in theory"

yann, you have captured this theory quite well,
especially in this line

What we'll be ruled by laws
of not-even-the-same-twice
looks like mice


the meaning to this poem certainly draws the reader to a pondering
state, i also liked how you put intent into your work, nice job,
thanks for being poet, mike