Even This

Even This

A Poem by Yarom

 

Through dark walls
A bite
A beat
A break
Discovered heads
Stone washed hearts
Shining three days
Odd unnecessary images

 

 [Illustrated by BSK]

© 2009 Yarom


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Yann, you must be studying rules, not bad, the conjunction, transition, line break and simplicity work well with originality, now all you need is detail , although, i don't necessarily understand the meaning, as it loses me almost instantly, as in, I'm not sure what you are going for here, you have improved drastically
sinse i've last read your work. I look forward to reading more, thanks for sharing your talent.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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