Silent Echoes (The universe, Fate, and Serendipity. )

August 5/5

The echoes stained on the wall, maimed the heart bleed open.

Trembling hands closing uncertainty, daggers of the emptied lioness. 

The fixed and decisive ending to the night time misery, NO MORE...

Knowing that they survived the tremors of Gaia, was so much relief.

Release! Release!! Release!!! RELEASE!!!! 

The PAIN of wanting to resolve the decayed issues, GONE SILENT.

The messages of NOAH and Ananiel, The blue ocean of galaxy.

Moving far away through an eye of a deep ravine, Milestones.

I can't hear her anymore, I can't see her anymore.

Lasting yearning directing echoes, Iron age. 

Pleading with God, before the sickle of life strikes

On one fine day, reliving the sweet taste of prune mature peach.

Lighting a candle on the second Moon of August, facing the next Sun. 

To an old ending, To a new beginning.

Echoes fading left a scar, dandelions in the sky.

The universe, Fate, and Serendipity.  

Author's Note

The Sunflower blooms beautifully.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

WOW! Your writing feels urgent & spectacular & compulsive & full of contrasts. I'm not a fan of the "action" genre, but your poem is so well done, so mesmerizing, it arrested my attention & planted scenes in my mind of an action-packed, emotion-packed epic saga. Your imagery is sparkling fresh & vivid. I love the title & the last line, how it wraps up the action & puts it into the context of spirit (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[YanZeros]

hi Ms. Margie :) thank you for reviewing this writing. You read this like a movie inside your head!?! :D Thank very much for the love!