Crown

Parade 3/5

Weigh light as a feather

The wind caught you with ease 

I couldn't help but notice 

Your,

Sunkissed fair skin

Trickles down your cheeks 

Left a mark on your unflawed beauty... 

Awed in wonder, has she always been like this? 

Like a swan wearing a queen's crown

Sits at the top of a current body of water

Poised, dignified, and brimming with confidence. 

As she passes by on the scenery... 

As glorious as her...

Author's Note

reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Swans are beautiful, graceful regal creatures. I am in awe of the when I see them on the river, just as you are captivated by your own swan who has stolen your heart. A love poem in my opinion and nicely done.

Chris

[YanZeros]

Thank you for your review Christine! Someone just caught my attention. 😂 I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Very much so. Thank you.

[duff]

A love affair intimately described with a deft touch. The imagery paints a picture you can't escape. Well written. Definitely enjoyed it.

[YanZeros]

hi Duff! Thank you for leaving a review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[YanZeros]

the imagery paints a picture you can't escape ~ WOW!

[Anastasia McKenzie-Polk]

This was a wonderful We need to describe beauty and its simplest form. Without giving it a face and without objectifying it.

[YanZeros]

Thank you Anastasia 😊 👑