Beholder

Bohemian Love (2/5)

Softly gusting winds

Sprinkles salty seawater

Breathing in the taste

 

Metallic blue coats

Infinite serenity

Drench peace to thy soul!

 

Look far! Then you'll see

The Shimmering Sunset Glow!

Raining down the land

 

Vast Cumulus Clouds

Separates the Earth and Sky

Sundering the Light!

 

Casting through the Fog

Outlining the Mountainscapes

Braced by Mystery

 

Makes me wonder why

Am I the only human?

Praising this Beauty!

Author's Note

reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

Reviews

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

You weave a wondrous scene that's captivating in beauty but also closes with a good point; it's reflective for both the writer and reader. People become so focused on the comings and goings of their own lives, they sometimes forget the luster of things and people around them. Thanks for sharing.

[YanZeros]

Thank you! and thank you for leaving an insightful review Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee) :) and You're Welcome!

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

It's good writing and no prob!

[Mars]

You're definitely not the only one loving the dreamy sea and listening to its wave music. Lots of gypsy souls out here. Nice imagery. Good read.

[YanZeros]

Thank you M! ☺️

[Taino]

The imagery is so beautiful. I can see the oceanand feel the salted breeze as I read. Very well written!

[YanZeros]

Thank you Sir Taino ^^ Happy Holidays

[Valentine]

If these are the haiku writes, you have mastered them. I am totally a mess trying this type of a write. Nice going. Valentine

[YanZeros]

Thank you Ms. Valentine. Yes I'm writing this using haiku 5-7-5 syllable format. Still got lots to learn in writing haiku. :) Happy Holidays!

[M. L. F.]

Nice imagery here. Lots of detail. Thank you for sharing this piece with us..
..Misty

[YanZeros]

Thank you Misty! I had fun writing this Haiku :)

[OhSnapShley]

Well done. Enjoyed reading. And I had to read more than once. Thanks for sharing.

[YanZeros]

Thank you for reading and reviewing! OhSnapShley and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. you're welcome! :D xD

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Nicely done...and no you're not the only one. Sometimes our vision is so foggy said blurred that the beauty get lost. Lovely piece/imagery. Starz

[YanZeros]

Thank you Starzy :) you are right! The beauty gets lost when no one appreciates it.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I hope you are not the only one..but when we admire the vastness of this world, sometimes it seems we are alone..a single heart, and soul in praise..

NICE..!!

Jazzy

[YanZeros]

Thank you Jazzy! That is true, I'm hoping so too!

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome................ Jazzy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

No you aren't the only one :p
Jokes apart.. This was nice! Often we ignore the beauties of the world only focusing on our sorrows.. Beautifully captured 👍

[YanZeros]

Thank you Yumna I'm glad that I'm not the only one who appreciates this bountiful scenery! Your words are true!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome Yan! Always a pleasure ☺
Keep up the good work 👍

[YanZeros]

:) xD now its your turn to write your Haiku.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah well yes... I hope I can...

[YanZeros]

Of course you can!