Bonfire

Bohemian Love (1/5)

No I’m not in love I’m just Inspired

To the new things that have been going on in my life

The marvels I thought only with you it’ll realized

Which never occurred to me till you said your goodbyes

I never believe I’ll survive going through on this heartaches of mine

But then I started to understand It was all me that made the sacrifice

I won’t deny that you made me happy for once in awhile

You filled my life with joy and glory that I could cry

Until you take back all the words you said it was just a lie

No I’m not in love I’m just inspired

To the new things been going on in my life

I feel more weightless and free without sad thoughts in my mind

Only now I think for myself and the good people that surround me

To whom I believe deserves my attention and affection

I know from them it won’t be put to waste nor hate

I will take my time and stay for awhile

Enjoying the music 'n sounding beat on this big ol’ bonfire

I’m saying no I’m not in love I’m just inspired

Now I can rest easy and sleep well at night

Praying for tomorrow that will come

A chance I’ll fall in love again will be the right one

And I advice myself to be more careful on giving my heart away

Thank you very much J Todd Underhill for featuring this poetry in your soundcloud channel and thank you also for correcting some words I so much appreciate it! Thank you very much! 

Coffee With Underhill soundcloud reading link: https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-underhill-12-15-2016

J Todd Underhill Writerscafe link: http://www.writerscafe.org/J%20Todd%20Underhill

Do check J's soundcloud channel for more poetry reading and have good time!

Author's Note

reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I like the line: "I'm not in love, I'm just inspired" . . . this could apply to many things in life, besides people. I get the sense that this narrator is not being truthful with him/herself when saying this, tho. The story-in-a-poem shows that the other's actions were hurtful & this is one good way to turn pain into creativity. Very relatable storyline for us writers. There are a few places where the English construction isn't as smooth & clear as it could be. But your imagination & storytelling carries the reader thru the story with interest.

[YanZeros]

Thank you Barleygirl! and Happy New Year! You got it right! I am so glad that the feelings that I wrote resonates with you. Yes this is the point of life that you wish to move on quickly like you wanted to deny every hurtful feeling. By surrounding yourself with people and spending time with them will somehow heal a broken heart. Hoping this diversion will tend to the lonely heart and get inspiration.

[J Todd Underhill]

Good writing. The format on the pace is the only think I can suggest tinkering with. Liked the piece though.

[YanZeros]

Thank you for reviewing J Todd Underhill :)

[J Todd Underhill]

I read a bunch of poetry, and I give my thoughts as honestly and encouragingly as I can. If you have a moment give this a listen, https://soundcloud.com/user-557255780/coffee-with-underhill-12-03-2016
Let me know if you would be interested in submitting something

[Nova_TK]

good job i enjoyed it thank you very much

[YanZeros]

thank you Nova_TK I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[wordman]

and inspiration is worth it`s weight in gold,and the closeness that you feel about another is a treasure

[YanZeros]

Thank you for sharing such fine words wordman :)

[wordman]

it was a pleasure,my friend