Unspoken

Old House 4/5

Words spoken can make the glass broken,

Glass broken can make the skin bleed open,

Bleed open can be the end of the words unspoken.

Author's Note

reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is thought-provoking! Words are what make all the difference! Although I think eyes are what that really kills it.. Good work! I loved reading this 😊

[YanZeros]

you got a very powerful eyes! xD :P Thank you for leaving a review Yumna!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol just hope you never get the blast of 'em 😂
You are welcome, Ric ☺

[The dark story]

Words...be precise with them. However that becomes one of the toughest thing in the world sometimes!
Strong message imbued in few words.

[YanZeros]

Thank you for reviewing Atiba Sheikh :) your words are true! and also expressing feelings into words is tough too!

[The dark story]

Agreed! Especially when I am out of words :(

[YanZeros]

Yes and that is the time when things will have wings and flew out of the window! or when we cry. But when you're surprised or amazed or shock.. its not sad to be out of words you know.

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

Quite true. You display a strong message here in few words, ones that are imbued with wisdom. Every action causes a reaction, just as words spoken or unspoken. Thank you for sharing!

[YanZeros]

Thank you Jack Necron :)

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

You are welcome!

[wordman]

,words can make you,or break you
every one should consider what they say

[YanZeros]

They should! but once the mind, governs by the flaming emotions of the heart, unsheathed words will definitely come out! Thank you wordman :)

[wordman]

my pleasure,

[Marina]

Powerful lines. I admire the simplicity and raw truth coming out of this piece.

[YanZeros]

Thank you Marina xD the word "admire" made me blush :P :)

[ReedWrite]

Interesting piece.
It's like the circle of life in a way...or the circle of communication. Nicely done.

[YanZeros]

Thank you ReedWrite :)
We can connect or disconnected through words spoken.