Spotlight

Old House (1/5)

In a four cornered room

Tropical sunlight cast its beams

Divided by the glass pane of jalousies

Carrying the visible dust particles

Floating till light touches the wooden floor

As the sun moves at its peak

As the temperatures rises

As the breeze getting warmer

The rays has gone closer and closer

To the edge of the window sill

Amazed by the dust dancing riding flowing in the air

Spotlighted by the sunbeam 

Has vanished...

Are you still there my tiny enthusiastic entertainers?

Author's Note

reviews are welcome, let me know your thoughts :D

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That need to be known, to leave a mark on the world is too strong.. We often enough want to be remembered, if not by the whole world then by the few that we really value and want 'them' to remember us... I liked reading this! Kinda made me sad still good work! ☺

[YanZeros]

Thank you Yumna! :) Cheer up!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! I'll try to 😉

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

This is different and creates some wonderful underlying messages. Sometimes it's not until the "light" leaves that we realize what we're missing. You pen great imagery here as well as show that magic really can be discovered anywhere. Thank you for sharing YanZeros!

[YanZeros]

Thank you Jack Necron :) and Happy Holidays!

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

You are welcome and hope you had a Merry Christmas!

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Beautifully detailed imagery. Sometimes we need light for things to come into focus. I enjoyed this. Starz

[YanZeros]

Thank you Starzy :) i'm glad you enjoyed it too!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I can relate this to small things in our lives that we cannot almost see. But there will be time that we will see them through the light/spotlight coming from somewhere.
A smart piece. Good job!

[YanZeros]

Thank you for dropping by and writing your thoughts Dhaye! :) Your words are True!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Had to look up "jalousies"...and now I know....

Sometimes we can not appreciate
the momentary little Joys in life..
Light brings focus to the magic within
our world, and as quickly
vanishes..

Gifts.. and wonders to behold !
Nice !!..........................Jazzy

[YanZeros]

Thank you Jazzy! :) for this inspiring review! lovin' it!

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are most welcome dear poet... Jazzy

[Marina]

Beautiful, very iconic! I really enjoy it when poems offer strong visuals, so kudos sir ;)

[YanZeros]

Thank you madam Marina! :) xD "Gathering all the energy in the entire universe to shoot all the imagery in person's mind." "Genki Dama!" :D

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Loved the imagery and detail, it was very engaging, held me from beginning to the end. :)

[YanZeros]

Thank you Cyprian Van Dyke! :) I'm glad it entertained you as well.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

We have all been enthralled by the rays of light and the millions of dust particles that can be seen.
Here the message can clearly be taken as that with time the spotlight will vanish. Fame will not last forever and even those in the spotlight will one day be subdued by a life of darkness

[YanZeros]

On point Shabeeh Haider! Thank you for expounding more the message of this poetry! Once you notice someone's uniqueness your attention will give focus on that being. You'll experience and learn what you see they'll do in their lives. With so little time so many fun things to explore and discover. :D

[Shabeeh Haider]

So rightly said. Keep writing

[YanZeros]

:) thank you