Faceless poet

 

Trap in an isolated era.

View me as faceless persona

Of make-belief identities

In this world filled with fantasies.

 

I write because I am tired,

To pen the burden in this poet’s ride.

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Trap in an isolated era. ( This is a loner or prefer to be alone, perhaps no one could understand this person other than yourself )

View me as faceless persona ( You identify yourself as someone that has no name, no face, no legacy, a nobody perhaps, but why identify to such faceless entity when we could be somebody, We do have different personality. I 'm sure someone like even a nobody )

Of make-belief identities ( unable to face and cope with reality we create our own world where we can at least be anybody that we want to believe )

In this world filled with fantasies. ( an escaped, our secret hiding place other than the real one or the real world )

I write because I am tired, ( Writing became your diversion, a scape goat )

To pen the burden in this poet’s ride. ( to express the inexpressible )

What's intriguing piece...Beautiful even in just few words but deep words conveying deep emotions and thoughts

[Faceless Poet]

Thank you so much sir. You reading this piece is already enough.

[NeiL ArandA]

FB would you care to read my piece. " The Lonely Sparrow " perhaps you could relate ...

[Faceless Poet]

I just did, just now I finished my response, I thank you for this wonderful and awesome review. Its amazing how you see everything, glad to know such person, who can see and somehow relate to this.

[Eric Pudalov]

I am a bit saddened when I read this, but I can certainly understand what you mean. You prefer anonymity and solitude, because this seems like an age in which so many of us remain nameless.

You, with this profile, want to symbolize the isolation and falsehood of the "technological age," because it allows you to express yourself without showing your true identity to others.

"I write because I am tired/To pen the burden in this poet's ride," almost sounds as if your alternate persona is doing your writing for you, in order to take on some of the weight of sadness and depression.

You may feel alone and isolated, but these are honestly all feelings I can relate to. I've had this throughout life, so just know that there are others out there. I enjoyed reading it!

[Faceless Poet]

Thank you, Eric....
I do keep my hopes up to believed that there is...

[Sami Khalil]

Well, at least your pen has a face and an identity which is the mouthpiece of this faceless poet. A wonderful write...:)............

[Faceless Poet]

Thank you very much, Sami. My pen is much stronger than me, myself, so I hide behind it, to strive my life full of disappointing expectation...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)..............

[NeiL ArandA]

I'll be back for this ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"i write because i am tired"

me too...tired of heartache, tired of the pain of life, tired of the struggle...

almost like a suicide note...

here are my final words...i will put them into a poem.

sometimes i feel trapped in my poems...a faceless poet....as you say here...apt description.

nicely done

[Faceless Poet]

thank you sir.

[MoriartyMesa]

No matter how hard we refuse to see something, there is always Substance to Shadow. In this case Identity to the unknown.


I liked this, but i would press you to be more than another mask.

[Faceless Poet]

Thank you, I would be, but for now, I remain as the masked of unknown.

[Belle]

Writing has really helped people to resolve longstanding issues about internal as well as external struggles.

This is very relatable, faceless. thank you for sharing.

[Faceless Poet]

smiles from a hundren miles. Thanks a lot.

[Faceless Poet]

****hundred

[Faceless Poet]

Sometimes, we are so tired to be seen, sometimes we are tierd of life,
And sometimes we just want to be invisible, for me, that's not possible anymore (sigh)
I'm for too long on this place, but hell yeah, how I loved it to be just invisible for a day,
To gain inspiration from new poets, and to make art with new poets, Be forever mysterious,
Love your incognoto persona, for there you grow, as I shall admire.

- Elisa

[Faceless Poet]

ahh, so nice to hear from you,
thank you...

I am tired and most of the time wanting to retire
in life there are so many satire

so many happiness in this world, away from my reach
Perhaps I am not able or not wanting be breach
too afraid of love and what it teach

a coward of my own isolation
a faceless person in the crown of nation

thank you again for giving your light, dear one...

There are only satire it seems lately lol.... but yeah, that's why I am on a hiatus, now and then pop in for my goodies... who deserve a review from me. It's so nice to hear from you too. Love is an art, only the strongest can handle dear one.... it's a fragile package of post, not to break.... it's a tenderness, of realness, you must be ready for. :) Never anyone is a coward, never anyone is isolated either, for it's a only choice to be there. If you choose to love, you shall love. If you want to be separeated, you will be. Simple as that. But never a coward, just a real person who loves to follow his own voice, what's wrong with that? :) Love to you x

[Dhaye]

Admit it, faceless poet...fantasies are nice escapes to become happy for a while. LOL.
Smile always...(wink) :)

[Faceless Poet]

ahh, mother monster, now an angel, now me, being the monster sheds my face to become faceless. it is true and so they say... fantasies are temporary dreams... an escape from reality..

thank you again, Faceless being is glad with your visit...

[Dhaye]

... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"To pen the burden in this poet’s ride."
We are not so faceless today. Internet bring faces to words. Most writers use their words to fix and cure some need. Being tired of what life is, is one. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. You open the door to a long conversation.
Coyote

[Faceless Poet]

Thank you very much sir.

I, the faceless being sheds my face to pen down the tired face, hopefully it lifts up a lighter feeling.