SPRING

INCINERATED TO A PULP;

SEEDS MADE UNTO VESSELS.

BEHOLD THE SCENT OF MUDDY RAINS,

WHEN THE FLORAS WHISPER AND INCARNATE.

WHAT WAS SOWN ONCE IS MADE TWICE;

ONE LEAF SHALL BE MADE TWO

FOR THE BIRCH TO GROW THRICE.

A PASSENGER DISMOUNTS THE TRAIN IN

HASTE, THEN SOARS

ABOVE MEDOWS OF DREAD, TO REST ATOP AN INFANT'S BOSOM.

MADE IN THE ONE NAME, THE FALLEN LEAVE YET LIVE;

FOR IN ELYSIUM, NO FALL PREVENTS THE BLOSSOM.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

The movement in this poem is extraorcinary! Is as if the urge to merge all things living must be done and - now. You need to see and feel the growth that's been hidded, laid in waiting for it grand entrance and so it does.. beautiful and intent in gifting all it has to Man for as long as can

'WHAT WAS SOWN ONCE IS MADE TWICE;
ONE LEAF SHALL BE MADE TWO
FOR THE BIRCH TO GROW THRICE.'

That: a miracle to behold via life in the endless even dormant all about; we mere humans can miss such beauty even in a blink of an eye.

[Betty Hermelee]

A very interesting and well written piece that brings nature and humans together.... the life cycle is similar
and both need nurturing... lovey descriptions of nature and the light of new life in both ....
Warmly, B

[Shreya Dixit]

Can feel the positivity of the poem...!
Nicely inked....

[Amy R]

Lovely poem evolving around the interconnectedness of life and nature's cycle.

The imagery of seeds, leaves, and the birch tree symbolizes growth and renewal, while references to a passenger and an infant suggest a journey and the innocence of new beginnings.

Thanks for sharing your poem, it's always a pleasure reading your work.
-Amy

[Yahya Oulad Aouid]

Thank you for passing pass, Amy!
Your interpretation is right on point, it is an ensemble of ideas enmeched in symbols. I am still experementing with this style, trying to refine it and your words of appreciation are much cherished!!

-Yahya

[Amy R]

Very good to know, you're welcome,
U are doing that style very well...