Hope less

He offers me stars
he offers me the whole sky
says he loves me
but,
i don't want that

he offers me things
he owns, and also things
he does not possesses at all
what does he even see in me?
why does he fight for a love that can't come back to him?

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

U wrote it on behalf? A fine appealing poem, very poetic and wow i like how u say he offers both the possible and impossible. Kudos.

Hi, so nice to read from you again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem here, titled, "jumbo jets vs jackdaws ..". Such interaction is my way to say hi to poets.