Anew.

Goodbye means a new start.

Fairytale dust

escaped my grasp

you no longer

are my past

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Very meaningful, you said a lot in four lines.

[Yahallo]

Thanks! Sometimes less is more. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Absolutely.
You're welcome :)

[sette]

moving on starts, healing starts onward with courage.

[Yahallo]

Indeed. :)

[barleygirl]

Perfectly crafted with simple sentiments & intriguing rhyme. What a refreshing switch from the usually drab & dreary "break-up" poems! Moving on can be a celebration, too! (as you've so comfortably described here) . . . Fondly, Margie

[Yahallo]

Yup, it's all about the outlook.

Thanks a lot!

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

LOllll I love it- fairy dust - wonderful- wish I may wish I might - turn u into my delight- great words - magical and some things do come true- never stop believing🌹

[Yahallo]

Exactly. :)

Thanks for your kind words!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[Anjali]

Wow! So beautiful... It is such a short poetry but holds so much meaning. I loved it! Keep writing!

[Yahallo]

Thank you soo much, Anjali. :)

[Govind singh]

They say forgive and forget...and that's how it works like u described in Ur piece...small but deep..loved it

[Yahallo]

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it! X