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A Poem by Yahallo
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A big playground in my head but there's no playing.

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my thoughts like to race each other
which one will go the furthest
which one will go the fastest
they're too old for these games

in my head everything is gray
a sad carousel spinning
round and round
with no one around

what do they win and what do they gain
from running around in my head?
i always have to remind myself
"they are just t h o u g h t s and not your f r i e n d s"




© 2018 Yahallo


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Rye
LOVE THIS...
Loved those last lines the most.
this is amazing, I will be reading more.
Awesome!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yahallo

6 Years Ago

Haha, wow, thank you so much!♡ I really appreciate your review and kind words!
Rye

6 Years Ago

not a problem

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Added on January 14, 2018
Last Updated on January 14, 2018
Tags: Personal, poem, life, sad, anxiety, pain, depression

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Yahallo
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