You Took 'Goodbye' Too Literally

You Took 'Goodbye' Too Literally

A Poem by Yahallo
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When you stop being friends with someone...for no particular reason. I think that hurts the most.

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I'll never throw away our photos
It shows me you were here
Doesn't matter you left
You still painted on my heart

The eyes I once [thought I] knew
Today looked like two black holes
Drawing in me and in and in
Only to be left with simple nothing

The words I once [thought I] loved
Today sounded from outer space
Maybe you are calling me
But I don't understand you

The laugh I once [thought I] inspired
Today sounded like a hurting deer
And I looked like a wolf
Are you running away from me?

The steps I once [thought I] followed
Today felt like a walk on ice
I want the long path
But you take the shortcut

The thoughts I once [thought I] understood
Today seemed like a knife in the back
And I can't take it out by myself
Can't you see the hole you left there?

The best friend I once [thought I] had
Today acted like a stranger
Can we meet again?
I'll tell you all about myself

[Never] or [Again]





© 2017 Yahallo


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Well written. Clever and better yet clever without over icing the thoughtful cake beneath.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yahallo

6 Years Ago

Thank you so so much, kind sir! It was a touchy subject for me, but might as well pour it down on pa.. read more

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Added on December 26, 2017
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