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I am to enjoy this... bacause who knows how long it will last....

When you called out

in the darkenss of the velvet night

where the stars were our only way home,

I tried to grasp your hand

where it was only met by air

by learning love

by learning pain

I became human

to know what you felt was not at all real

becuase in reality

karma has played a game

where we are imprisoned

not in chains

but threads,

where freedom is easy

but we choose to be kept

because if you weren't here

where would I go

you are no where else but here

so I am to enjoy this

because who knows how long it will last

karma has played a game

where we have no where else to go

and no where to go to

because we can only survive with each other

Author's Note

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Reviews

[OceanTropic]

Wow. I really appreciated this piece.

"karma has played a game"

So simple yet so brilliant, I wish I had thought of this myself. Right now, with what i'm going through, this piece is actually uplifting. I agree with what you say, that this is supposed to happen, that its here for as long as it needs to be, so we might as well take it for what it is and enjoy what we can.

Great food for thought.

[manifesto]

I get the feeling of two people tied together (by threads, of course) and the fact that they have each other makes even the hell they're going through heaven. :)

I'm gonna add another review cuz i dont remember reading this before. This is AWESOME! Genius work! I'll be adding this to my favourites.

[State of Grace]

I love this!

[Ian Faraway]

Short, sweet, emotional, powerful. Very well written. Good job.

Wow! This is sooo good! I love it! You've got a play with the words. :)

[al25]

Love the last line because its the truth we cant survive without each other, Great write. Enjoyed reading your writing.

[Abdul Aziz]

Great! It played out like a mystic longing of the soul. I'm sorry if I made no sense, but this is a very good poem.

[KAREN]

I really loved this! It was heartfelt and well written!