Where is Home?

Where is Home?

A Poem by Blossom
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this is an Etheree poem. My teacher introduced it in class and is based upon a picture.

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Bright

Like stars

On the floor

Illuminate

The silent waters

On this clear starless night

Home is where I wish to be

As I pass by alone tonight

So kiss my skin, leaving warmth behind

Taking in this town, home is where I’ll be

© 2011 Blossom


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Blossom
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Echoes with sad, hollowing loneliness...beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i'd like to see the picture for this poem. It's eerie and lonely. Atleast thats how i take it. Great work! :>

Posted 13 Years Ago


the first 5 lines made me think of corals at the bottom of the ocean... the second part I don't know what to make of but I like it as a whole nevertheless. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Blossom
Blossom

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada



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