Will you....

these are the questions that race through my mind, but there's only one I want to ask, but will be forever left unsaid

Will you love me gently?
Will you love me only?
Will you kiss my lips with passion?
like I've heard many others talk about
or
Will you leave me alone...
just like I was before you came along?
Will you hold me close when I'm insecure?
Will you comfort me when I want to cry?
I ask all these...
though I know you can't hear
after all you're not a mind reader
but there's a question on my lips
that I'm itching to ask
but I can't
for its not in my place
....
forever left unsaid
as I leave this place
like a slave,
its what I've always been
a w***e is what others say
forever left unsaid,
Will you give me freedom to do as I wish?

Author's Note

Please Review. Tell me what you think. Should I leave it as it is or change it to make it better.

Reviews

[manifesto]

This is filled with a tornado of emotions. Lovely!

[al25]

This is really deep. Has so many meanings if u think about it. Great write. You dont need to change it. Its real.

Amazing! I loved it! I'm being absolutely sincere. :) I can realte to it in a funny way... ;)