Chaos

so loud...
its unbearable

the only place
that was once safe
now a prison
without no escape

run from the world
all of its problems
hide in your head
where everything becomes numb

chaos...
everything is a mess
can't think straight anymore
there's no place left

Chaos....
Chaos....
its just too much to bear

so deep...
its tears my head apart
no place to hide
but in chaos....

Author's Note

Please Tell Me What you think.

Reviews

[OceanTropic]

Hiding in chaos. Beautiful oxymoron.

I would have enjoyed a bit more detail, I found this poem to be very vague and broad. Unless of course that's what you were aiming for.

[manifesto]

"no place to hide
but in chaos..."

When we're all screwed up, we hide behind that all-screwed-up-ness to make it seem like we're not all screwed up. Such truth and honesty, I often feel the same way.

[YouoweYoupay]

so loud...
its unbearable

I enjoyed the sad, slightly painful darkness and confusion in this poem. Well-expressed emotions. Good peom. Keep writing.

-Wella.

Chaotic! Intense. It's mind boggling. :) Great write!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I understand this helpless constriction well~ it seems the world mankind has created is pure crushing sorrow and filled with needs that chase us even in our slumber~ powerful and riveting poem~

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I feel this so familiar, many times no place to hide...The Chaos is always too strong, but at least we have wish to escape...Nice and expressive!

[Workingonit!!]

Well I will say the world has certainly done better and financially alot of people are in a mess.. this writing sounds more personal and mysterious. The emotions contained sure due seem chaotic.. the desensitization and the format and image also adds to the fear within.. very realistic.