Alone

just a thought I had.. that rhymed

In this barren place
you broke me
tore down my walls
and held me
do you finally realize
how much you mean to me

Author's Note

Please Review!!!

Reviews

[OceanTropic]

Short and sweet....well not sweet more like sad...short and sad :)

[Jazique]

Simple but unique. i like it.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great write..I could feel the emotion..Good job..Love the picture..Sara

[manifesto]

Short, simple, sweet, awesomely rocking!!! I really like the rhyme, and I get what you mean by "a thought you just had", that's how most of my writing starts :D So, I love it! I believe that even the shortest poems can portray so much, as long as you write it with feeling. No need to expand the poem, I can feel the emotion! (heehee)

[Aven]

Truly warms my heart! Love the format, love the thought, love the execution. Loved it!

I LOVE this! I think I can relate Blossom!! :>

[Vintage]

A short piece . . . It would be nice to see more detail about why this person means so much to you. That's just a suggestion that I had. But, even though you said this was just a thought that you had, it could be expanded to make a pretty awesome poem. Good job.