With no Verdict

With no Verdict

A Poem by Blossom
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basically about the harsh judgments of the world

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With no change of heart
I look up to the sky
Life isn't fair
often leaves untied

Guilty, until proven
You're wrapped up in chains
hung from the wall
taking the blame

Charged for a death
that was your own
Why'd you do it?
please answer me so

the raven cry out
their song for the dead
Everyone's judgmental
maybe that's why you left

© 2010 Blossom


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A powerful poem. So many lines stood out.
"Guilty, until proven
You're wrapped up in chains"
Too many want to be a judge. Need less judges and more friends. I understand the ending. Better to escape then wait for the final decision. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


It has that very strong and emotional state. I love this poem because it shows how you feel. I love peoms that are about how you feel. Just... wonderful... Wording is great and they flow into each stanza perfectly.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a very strong poem, the wording is great, the way the stanzas and the words flow is gorgeous. Great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Blossom
Blossom

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada



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