The world that I live in

He's a stranger to the world I live in

Yet he controls the wind

Lets it whip through my hair

Forget who I am

For a second

Lets never part

From this world that I live in

From this world you created

To ease the pain away

For a second

For a minute

An hour

You let the sun touch my skin

Let me feel the warmth on my back

Spread a glow of hope

With happiness

Through my soul

We may not be perfect

But that doesn't matter

Nothing seems to

When I'm with you

Nothing seems to

When I'm with you

Author's Note

>bad grammar problems >bad speller >only 13 >thank you for your time :)

Reviews

[Trikius]

Nice feeling behind it for 13 very good work.

[Helena]

This is truly beautiful Anya! Very well penned indeed....keep up the good work.
Thank you for submitting this to my contest "A Chance to Shine" ~ Helena

[Voice]

Very beautiful I love it!! It flows very well and because you don't use names you allow the reader to relate to your piece. This is a wonderful write with a powerful emption...love. Just beautiful...

Voice

[Kristopher]

"From this world that I live in

From this world you created

To ease the pain away

For a second

For a minute

An hour"

That was a beautiful line! Your poetry is amazing, and you use good imagery, it felt like I was really there, experiencing the entire thing! Gorgeous poem!

[Poetique]

I Love It!!! It's great...my favorite part is:
"We may not be perfect
But that doesn't matter
Nothing seems to
When I'm with you"

Because it reminds me that the imperfections in someone are more lovable than there perfections!!!